Rédigé par AlwaysMorphine - English
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- Mark live in terraced house on Blue Street.
- It is named Blue Street because there are a lot of blue beautiful flowers, which grow near the road.
- Mark sits on the armchair in his basement every day.
- Here is his small room in his own.
- Man goes out every morning so he can enjoy these flowers.
- But now he can’t do this during several days.
- He has a stomach ache.
- He has difficult with walking.
- He has given up staying up because he wants to feel pain rarely.
- Repents gave the advice to visit a doctor but Mark carried on that the pain would pass.
- He thought that relatives were a storm in a teacup and he just felt himself under the weather.
- The weather is rainy, cold and damp today.
- It is bucket down that’s why a lot of people are drenched.
- Strong gale has packed a real wallop since early morning.
- A lot of streams have flowed down the streets.
- It is environmental disaster.
- Mark decided to set off early but he left home later than usually that’s why he is running now to get to work.
- Business day hasn’t been held up.
- Mark is hurrying.
- Suddenly, he slipped and fell to the ground.
- His stomach ache has rising.
- ‘I’ll visit doctor now!’ he decided.
- He was inspected by doctors.
- They told to Mark: ‘You have trouble with your health.
- We found purulent appendicitis.
- We are operating you in one hour ’.
- Mark agreed on the operation.
- Also, doctors said thet if Mark hadn’t visit them this day, he could die.
- As the English sayings goes, every cloud has a silver lining.
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