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Rédigé par AlwaysMorphine - English

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    • Mark live in terraced house on Blue Street.
    • It is named Blue Street because there are a lot of blue beautiful flowers, which grow near the road.
    • Mark sits on the armchair in his basement every day.
    • Here is his small room in his own.
    • Man goes out every morning so he can enjoy these flowers.
    • But now he can’t do this during several days.
    • He has a stomach ache.
    • He has difficult with walking.
    • He has given up staying up because he wants to feel pain rarely.
    • Repents gave the advice to visit a doctor but Mark carried on that the pain would pass.
    • He thought that relatives were a storm in a teacup and he just felt himself under the weather.
  • The weather is rainy, cold and damp today.
    • It is bucket down that’s why a lot of people are drenched.
  • Strong gale has packed a real wallop since early morning.
    • A lot of streams have flowed down the streets.
    • It is environmental disaster.
    • Mark decided to set off early but he left home later than usually that’s why he is running now to get to work.
  • Business day hasn’t been held up.
    • Mark is hurrying.
    • Suddenly, he slipped and fell to the ground.
    • His stomach ache has rising.
    • ‘I’ll visit doctor now!’ he decided.
    • He was inspected by doctors.
    • They told to Mark: ‘You have trouble with your health.
  • We found purulent appendicitis.
    • We are operating you in one hour ’.
    • Mark agreed on the operation.
    • Also, doctors said thet if Mark hadn’t visit them this day, he could die.
    • As the English sayings goes, every cloud has a silver lining.

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