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Text from Symmons - English

  • This Time (part 4)

    • Losing that something we loved so much is a pain that brings light it was what it made us deeply happy.
    • Does it mean sorrow is actually necessary to realize we enjoyed an old time before?
    • This acceptance of that new "modern" life we inoculate in us aren't a natural human decision, sick-brains cannot be good decision-makers.
    • If we were in good condition and healthy holistic-thought never would we agree an insane scheme that gonna bring our enslavement and distroy all the human beauty.
    • Thinking we are free by being modern consumerist-slave and seeking an infinite unsatisfiable materialism purpose is what we want from us and it does work.
    • In a society where we control out thoughts and where we make a fool every nonconformist ideas that could high-rise human life and make it more liveable.

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    • This acceptance of that new "modern" life we inoculate in us aren't a natural human decision, sick-brains cannot be good decision-makers.
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    • This acceptance of that new "modern" life we inoculate in us areisn't a natural human decision, sick-brains cannot be good decision-makers.
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  • Sentence 4
    • If we were in good condition and healthy holistic-thought never would we agree an insane scheme that gonna bring our enslavement and distroy all the human beauty.
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    • If we were in a good condition and with healthy holistic- thought neverwe would wenever agree for an insane scheme that gonnais going to bring ourus enslavement and diestroy all the human beauty.
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  • Sentence 5
    • Thinking we are free by being modern consumerist-slave and seeking an infinite unsatisfiable materialism purpose is what we want from us and it does work.
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    • Thinking that we are free by being modern consumerist-slave and seeking an infinite unsatisfiabled materialism purpose is what we want from us and it does work.
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  • Sentence 6
    • In a society where we control out thoughts and where we make a fool every nonconformist ideas that could high-rise human life and make it more liveable.
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    • In a society where we control out thoughts and where we make a fool of every nonconformist ideas that could high-rise human life and make it more liveable.
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