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Text from aye_iso - English

  • What makes me mad ?!

    • Hii people , i'm going to tell u about the things which make me mad i will angry when the sink is Clogged also when the toilet won't flush or won't stop flushing , that's driving me crazy haha also when the fridge makes a funny sound or when the air-conditioning won't turn on that's a shame haha when mom's hair dryer make a funny sound also when my lap-top Does it , i feel like a have a piece of junk it looks like a lemon piece haha mmm what else ?!
    • i think these are the most things which make me angry i'll be happy when you correct me thank you a lot ^^

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    • Hii people , i'm going to tell u about the things which make me mad i will angry when the sink is Clogged also when the toilet won't flush or won't stop flushing , that's driving me crazy haha also when the fridge makes a funny sound or when the air-conditioning won't turn on that's a shame haha when mom's hair dryer make a funny sound also when my lap-top Does it , i feel like a have a piece of junk it looks like a lemon piece haha mmm what else ?!
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    • Hii people , iI'm going to tell you about the things which make me mad.

      i will      I get angry when the sink is Cclogged
      also      , when the toilet won't flush or won't stop flushing , that's drivinges me crazy haha.
      aAlso when the fridge makes a funny sound
      or      , when the air-conditioning won't turn on that's a shame haha
      w      . When mom's hair dryer makes a funny sound
      also       ,¶
      ,      when my lap-top Ddoes it , iI feel like a I have a piece of junk
      i      . It looks like a lemon piece haha ¶
      mmm what else ?!
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  • Vakya 2
    • i think these are the most things which make me angry i'll be happy when you correct me thank you a lot ^^
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    • i      I think these are the most things which mostly make me angry .

      iI'll be happy whenif you correct me.

      tThank yous a lot ^^.
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