Nhờ sửa bài giúp

Văn bản từ RkrdoVgo - English

    • The paper rocket - Traducción del cuento

    • Once upon a time a boy whose big illusion was has a rocket and launching to the moon, but, he has little money and he didn’t buy someone.
    • A day, near sidewalk he discovers the box of him favorite rocket, but when he opened it, he discovered that only has a small paper rocket broken down, it was a result of on the production factory.
    • The boy was sorry too much, but he think the at least would have a rocket, He states to prepare a stage for launching it.
    • For many days he recovers papers of all forms and colors and he dedicates with him soul to draw, cut, paste and paints all the stars and planets for creating a paper space.
    • That was a very hard work, but the final result was so magnificent that him room wall looks like an open window to outer space.
    • From that day, the boy enjoyed every day plays with him paper rocket, how a classmate visits it, her room and when he see that beauty stage, he proposed to him changes for an authentic rocket that he has at home.
    • That moment it was close to making him crazy of happiness and he accepted the change delighted.
    • From that day, day by day, when he plays with your new authentic rocket, the boy miss him paper rocket, with the stage and planets, because he really successfully plays with your old rocket.
    • By then he realized that he feels better when he played with those toys that he makes by himself with his efforts and illusion.
    • And so, that boy started to build him toys himself and when he grow up, he turned on the best toymaker of the world.

Xin hãy chỉnh sửa từng câu giúp tôi! - English

  • Tiêu đề
  • câu 1
    • Once upon a time a boy whose big illusion was has a rocket and launching to the moon, but, he has little money and he didn’t buy someone.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • Once upon a time, there was a boy whose big illusion was hasgest dream was to have a rocket and launching to the moon, but, he has little money and he didn’tdidn't have enough money to buy someone.
    • Once upon a time, there was a boy whose big illusion was hasgreat dream was to have a rocket and launching it to the moon, but, he has little money and he didn’t buy someonedidn't have enough money to buy it.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 1ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 1
  • câu 2
    • A day, near sidewalk he discovers the box of him favorite rocket, but when he opened it, he discovered that only has a small paper rocket broken down, it was a result of on the production factory.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • AOne day, near a sidewalk he discoversed the box of hims favorite rocket, but when he opened it, he discovered that there was only has a small paper rocket broken down, it was a result of on, damaged because of the production factory.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 2ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 2
  • câu 3
    • The boy was sorry too much, but he think the at least would have a rocket, He states to prepare a stage for launching it.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • The boy was sorry too much sad, but he thinkought theat at least he would have a rocket,. He startesd to prepare a stage for launching it.
    • The boy was sorry too much, but he think the at least would sad, but he thought: "At least, now I have a rocket,." He states to prepared a stage forto launching it.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 3ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 3
  • câu 4
    • For many days he recovers papers of all forms and colors and he dedicates with him soul to draw, cut, paste and paints all the stars and planets for creating a paper space.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • For many days he recoverscollected papers of all forms and colors and he dedicates with him sould himself to draw, cut, paste and paints all the stars and planets for creating a paper space.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 4ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 4
  • câu 5
    • That was a very hard work, but the final result was so magnificent that him room wall looks like an open window to outer space.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ThaIt was a very hard work, but the final result was so magnificent that him s bedroom wall looksed like an open window to outer space.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 5ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 5
  • câu 6
    • From that day, the boy enjoyed every day plays with him paper rocket, how a classmate visits it, her room and when he see that beauty stage, he proposed to him changes for an authentic rocket that he has at home.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • From that day, the boy enjoyed every day playsing with hims paper rocket, how a.His classmate visits it, hered his room and when he seeaw that beautyiful launching stage, he proposed to him for changes for an authentic rocket that he hasd at home.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 6ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 6
  • câu 7
  • câu 8
    • From that day, day by day, when he plays with your new authentic rocket, the boy miss him paper rocket, with the stage and planets, because he really successfully plays with your old rocket.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • From that day, day by day, when he playsed with yourhis new authentic rocket, the boy missed hims paper rocket, with the stage and planets, because he really successfully playsed with yourhis old rocket.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 8ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 8
  • câu 9
    • By then he realized that he feels better when he played with those toys that he makes by himself with his efforts and illusion.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • By then he realized that he feelslt better when he played with those toys that he makesde by himself with his efforts and illusion.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 9ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 9
  • câu 10
    • And so, that boy started to build him toys himself and when he grow up, he turned on the best toymaker of the world.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • And so, that boy started to build him toys himself and when he groew up, he turned onut to be the best toy-maker of the world. ¶
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 10ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 10