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  • THE ROLE OF THE MUSIC IN MY OWN CULTURE

    • The purpose of this essay is to show you the role music is in my own culture.
    • First of all, all of us are in a music world although we are not conscious.
    • It is the true that the music plays a significant and different role in some stage of our life.
    • Looking back I remember when I was 15, music was at first place in my life.
    • Usually I daily spent my time listen my favourite groups, I attend concerts, I tried to dress like them…In those day and age, music was a means of expressions and also a way of communication.
  • It is well-known that teenagers need to reaffirm their personality.
    • I was very fond of British music of the mid of eighties, and their sorts of music such as indie pop, post-punk… Nowadays, unfortunately adults we cannot spend a lot of time in order to listen music, we have other duties, and little by little music pass to other place, just a company.
    • Nevertheless, it must be said that music is always a way of expressing feelings, and there will be always a song that touch you.

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    • Usually I daily spent my time listen my favourite groups, I attend concerts, I tried to dress like them…In those day and age, music was a means of expressions and also a way of communication.
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    • Usually, I daily spent my time listening to my favourite groups,bands daily. I attended concerts, I and even tried to dress like them… In those days and age, music was a means of expressions and also a way of communication.
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    • Usually I daily spent my time listening to my favourite groups daily, I attended concerts, I tried to dress like them…In those day and age, music was a means of to expressions and also a way tof communicatione.
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    • I was very fond of British music of the mid of eighties, and their sorts of music such as indie pop, post-punk… Nowadays, unfortunately adults we cannot spend a lot of time in order to listen music, we have other duties, and little by little music pass to other place, just a company.
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    • I was very fond of British music of the mid of eighties, and their sorts of music such as indie pop, post-punk…¶
      Nowadays, unfortunately      , as adults, we cannot spend a lot of time in order to listening to music, as we have other duties, and, little by little, music pasdrops to othlower places, just a company.
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    • I was very fond of British music of the mid of eighties, and their sorts of music such as indie pop, post-punk…¶
      Nowadays, unfortunately       as adults we cannot spend a lot of time in order to listen to music, we have other duties, and little by little music passes to other place, just a company.
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    • Nevertheless, it must be said that music is always a way of expressing feelings, and there will be always a song that touch you.
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    • Nevertheless, it must be said that music is always a way of expressing feelings, and there will be always be a song that touches you. ¶
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