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  • THE ROLE OF THE MUSIC IN MY OWN CULTURE

    • The purpose of this essay is to show you the role music is in my own culture.
    • First of all, all of us are in a music world although we are not conscious.
    • It is the true that the music plays a significant and different role in some stage of our life.
    • Looking back I remember when I was 15, music was at first place in my life.
    • Usually I daily spent my time listen my favourite groups, I attend concerts, I tried to dress like them…In those day and age, music was a means of expressions and also a way of communication.
  • It is well-known that teenagers need to reaffirm their personality.
    • I was very fond of British music of the mid of eighties, and their sorts of music such as indie pop, post-punk… Nowadays, unfortunately adults we cannot spend a lot of time in order to listen music, we have other duties, and little by little music pass to other place, just a company.
    • Nevertheless, it must be said that music is always a way of expressing feelings, and there will be always a song that touch you.

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