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  • Computer and education

    • Having a computer at home helps their children to get a better education.
    • Nowadays, most people use computers for their studying.
    • Some people think that having a computer at home is useful for getting their children a better education, while others claim that computers distract their children from studying.
    • In my opinion, computers help children in their studying.
  • Firstly, students have to write a lot of essays and reports.
    • Thanks to the Internet and computers they can find necessary and actual information for their works.
    • Secondly, nowadays, people have the opportunity for self-education.
    • It means that children can study more subjects than they have at schools, and they can become an enlightened and high educated persons.
    • However, some people believe that children use computers only for entertainment not for studying.
  • In their view, pupils waste a lot of time, playing computer games, watching movies instead of doing homework tasks.
  • Personally, I do not agree with the above opinion.
    • I am convinced that not allpupils use computers onlyfor entertainment.
  • Most of them use it for getting a better education.
    • In conclusion, I believe that a computer is a very useful invention, whichhas greatly changed our life.
    • We use it for many purposes, and getting a good education is one of them.

МОЛИМО, ПОМОЗИТЕ ИСПРАВИТИ СВАКУ РЕЧЕНИЦУ! - English