Corrections

עזור לתקן שגיאות עכשיו!תוקן

טקסט של - English

    • The most important thing in our life is family

    • It is a common knowledge that family is the most valuable thing in our life.
    • In my opinion, human being cannot live without relatives.
  • Indeed, our parents are the most important people in our life.
  • They bring up and teach us.
    • Thanks to them, we become a personality because parents take part in our socialization most of all.
  • Moreover, we always find support and understanding in our family.
    • If we are in a difficult situation, we run to uor parents and relatives because we know that they help us.
  • Our contemporary world is very cruel and ruthless.
    • So, people often need words of encouragement, which we always can find in our family.
  • Some opponents might say that friends can replace family.
    • Often we do not get along with outpr relatives.
  • So, friends may become closer than parents.
    • They help us in a difficult situation with money and words of encouragement.
  • Some of them become a part of our family.
  • To a certain extent, it is right, but we should not forget that not all friends are true, and they can betray us.
    • But the members of your family always be in your side.
  • To sum it up, I want to say that people should spend more time with their relatives and parents.

בבקשה, עזור לתקן כל משפט! - English