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  • NATIONAL CUSTOM

    • The purpose of this article is to show you one of the most popular and followed national custom of Spain: “The Three Wise Men”.
    • That is a real party for childhood.
  • When parents, grandparents and relatives are involved in a fantasy world.
    • The three wise men come from East with their magic at an exciting night.
    • There are a lot of parades throughout Spain, in every city, town, village…the afternoon before “The Three Wise Men Day”.
    • Every single family goes to “The Three Wise Parade” in order to shout and say hello to their favourite Wise Man, called Melchor, Gaspar and Baltasar.
    • Apart from that it is a colourful and beautiful spectacle.
    • At this moment, children are worried about the letters sent by them asking gifts, furthermore they wonder themself if they have had a proper behaviour throughout the year before.
  • The custom says that children must put cookies and milk in their slippers in order to feed the camels.
    • This is the truth of it: It is the only night in which children want to go early to bed.
  • When the morning arrives they get up early too.
    • As you can imagine the exciting, amazing and happy day starts.
    • They find their presents and coal in some few occasions, in fact sugar coal.
  • Personally, I believe that it is a kind and friendly national custom.

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