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- Hello everyone
- Firstly I want to introduce myself.
- I am Turk and my native language is Turkish.
- I live in Ankara, the capital of Turkey.
I love English very much.
- I have studied for years to learn it as well as I can.
- I can easily understand when I read an English text but I have problems when I try to talk and write.
- I'd like to improve my writing and speaking skills.

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- Hello everyone
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- Hello everyone!!
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- Hello everyone¶
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  Your first statements are in perfect English, well done¶
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- Firstly I want to introduce myself.
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- Firstly, I want to introduce myself.
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- Firstly, I w~~ant~~ould like to introduce myself.
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- I am Turk and my native language is Turkish.
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- I am T turkish and my native language is Turkish.
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- I live in Ankara, the capital of Turkey.
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- I live in Ankara, the capital city of Turkey.
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- I live in Ankara, the capital of Turkey.¶
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  this sentence is perfect, you can add the word city but it is not essential¶
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- I love English very much.
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Sentence 5
- I have studied for years to learn it as well as I can.
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- I have studied for years to learn it as ~~well~~much as I can.
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- I have studied for years to learn it as well as I can.¶
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  this sentence is correct. ¶
  as well as ... suggests quality¶
  as much as ... suggests quantity
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- I can easily understand when I read an English text but I have problems when I try to talk and write.
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- I can easily understand when I read an English text but I have problems when I try to talk and write.¶
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  Perfect sentence, formal level,¶
  Informally you can leave out the word text.
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Sentence 7
- I'd like to improve my writing and speaking skills.
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- I'd like to improve my writing and speaking skills. ¶
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  Perfect sentence, it may be debated that it mightalso be:¶
  I'd like to improve my writing and my speaking skills. ¶
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  both are acceptable
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Hello everyone

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English

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