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  • Terror by Dan Simmons

    • A book "Terror" by Dan Simmons telling us a story on 800 pages about journey and survival in a terrible life conditions.
    • It's based on a real expedition in 1845 year, on 2 British ships "Terror" and "Erebus".
  • Their goal was to find a short North-west passage.
    • It was a very hard compaigh with many difficulties.
    • The luck wasn't on their side and they had to spend more then 2 years inside a frozen in the ice ships.
    • Because the ice didn't melt on their way for 2 years even on summer.
    • And just like it wasn't enough, food supplies start to become spoiled.
    • The ships after 2 years spent frozen in the ice threatened to collapse under the pressure of the ice.
  • The third problem in this expedition was a huge and terrifying monster, who started to kill team members of the ships.
    • It seems to me that the story is too long and borring sometimes.
    • I think it would have been better if the story had had only about 500 pages, not more.
    • The end of the book I liked very much, it makes the whole story looked not so dark and sad as it expected during reading.
    • If you like to read about survival in a cold area it's a not bad book to read.
    • When I was reading it reminds me novels of Jack London about gold diggers and indians of Alyaska.

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