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  • Tretyakov gallery

  • It was in Moscow in Tretyakov gallery.
    • Because I was dreaming to visit there.
  • It's a famous tourist attraction.
  • The State Tretyakov gallery is very big and there are many pictures.
    • This pictures are the great's artists Serov's, Vasnetsov's Repin's and many others'.
    • When we went there, a exhibition was Aivazovsky's.
    • His picture are beautiful.
  • Aivazovsky was seascapes.
    • He loved to draw a sea and we can to see it's.
    • The famous picture is 9 val wonderful.
  • The big waves show their power.
    • The people are doomed.In my opinion Aivazovsky wanted to show all power of elements, which not who can to subordinate.In this gallery can to see a portraits famous people's.
  • Example: Alexander's Pushkin, Ekaterina's Second, Alexander's third, Mariya's Lopukhina, girl's with peaches and many others'.
    • And a spellbinding landscapes had, which were drawing with Russian nature.
    • I must to say that The State Tretyakov gallery is one the most interesting of places in Moscow.

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