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Text from UrielG - English

  • Living in Madrid

    • About 4 years ago, I had the chance to travel to Spain to participate in a course that was of great relevance in my student life.
    • As a spanish speaker, I assumed that the course would be given in my language.
    • However, when the first day of classes finally came I was in awe because the teacher started to speak in english.
    • By that time my level of english was quite bad, despite I try to give a shot, the people who was surrounding me were almost fluent and it was terrible when the teacher started to ask to read or to answer some questions, moment in which I looked for the better place to hide myself.
    • This obviously because I felt that I wasn´t capable to overcome those kind of situations.
    • Moreover, my teacher was borned in Liverpool, so that make it worst due to I had to struggle a little bit harder to guess the real meaning of what was she saying.
    • I kept going over 4 months searching for a relief or a solution that could give me a better taste of what was doing there.
    • Without having the most accurate tools to tackle the problem, I realized that when the course finally end I would be enroll in english class.
    • Real life and a globalized world push us to adopt and make the english language ours, not only because you will get a better job with high wage but also because if you don´t speak english you´re not on the map so that brought me here.
    • In the end, it´s funny after 4 year, I'm still learning and fighting to be fluent in this incredible language hoping I can make it.

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    • About 4 years ago, I had the chance to travel to Spain to participate in a course that was of great relevance in my student life.
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    • About 4 years ago, I had the chance to travel to Spain to participate in a course that was of a great relevance in my student life.
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  • Sentence 4
    • By that time my level of english was quite bad, despite I try to give a shot, the people who was surrounding me were almost fluent and it was terrible when the teacher started to ask to read or to answer some questions, moment in which I looked for the better place to hide myself.
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    • ByAt that time my level of eEnglish was quite bad, despite that I tryied to give a shot, t. The peoplersons who wasere surrounding me were almost fluent and it was terrible when the teacher started to ask to read or to answer some questions, moment in which.At that moment I looked for thea better place to hide myself.
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    • Moreover, my teacher was borned in Liverpool, so that make it worst due to I had to struggle a little bit harder to guess the real meaning of what was she saying.
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    • Moreover, my teacher was borned in Liverpool, so that makde it worst de. Due to that I had to struggle a little bit harder to guess the real meaning of what was she was saying.
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  • Sentence 7
    • I kept going over 4 months searching for a relief or a solution that could give me a better taste of what was doing there.
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    • I kept going over 4 for months searching for a relief or a solution that could give me a better tastsense of what I was doing there.
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  • Sentence 8
    • Without having the most accurate tools to tackle the problem, I realized that when the course finally end I would be enroll in english class.
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    • Without having the most accurate tools to tackle the problem, I realized that when the course finally ends I would be enrolled in ean English class.
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  • Sentence 9
    • Real life and a globalized world push us to adopt and make the english language ours, not only because you will get a better job with high wage but also because if you don´t speak english you´re not on the map so that brought me here.
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    • Real life and a globalized world pushes us to adopt and make the eEnglish language ours, not only because you will get a better job with high wage but also because if you don´t speak eEnglish you´re not on the global map; so that brought me here.
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  • Sentence 10
    • In the end, it´s funny after 4 year, I'm still learning and fighting to be fluent in this incredible language hoping I can make it.
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    • In the end, it´s funny after 4 year,. I'm still learning and fighting to be fluent in this incredible language, hoping I can make it.
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