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    • Awarded a diploma by a BTS assistant of management alternately, I benefit from a convincing experience of three years within this business sector.
    • These three years in the field of the administrative management brought me to conclude that I wished to evolve in this domain, and more particularly to occupy a personal post of assistant.
    • The job offer wich you propose attracts me quite particularl and I estimate to be ready and to trained to make the wanted work.
    • I possess very big computing knowledge and I learnt to be multi-purpose.
    • Indeed during my previous employment, I realized many tasks, such as the physical and phone welcome, the management of the mail, the management of files, organisation of meetings… Futhermore, I moved regulary helped the various services.
  • Professional and motivated, I master all the functions inherent to my job.
    • I live in the region of West London.
    • I am available on December 15th, 2016 for an interview(maintenance) at your convenience and shall be delighted to exchange with you on my skills If my application is held, I shall be naturally available to begin December 22nd and 23rd, 2016.

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    • Awarded a diploma by a BTS assistant of management alternately, I benefit from a convincing experience of three years within this business sector.
    • Awarded a diploma by as BTS assistant of management alternately, I benefited from a convincing experience of three years within this business sector.
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    • These three years in the field of the administrative management brought me to conclude that I wished to evolve in this domain, and more particularly to occupy a personal post of assistant.
    • These three years in the field of the administrative management brought me to conclude that I wished to evolve in this domain, and more particularly to occupy a personal post ofas an assistant.
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    • The job offer wich you propose attracts me quite particularl and I estimate to be ready and to trained to make the wanted work.
    • The job offer which you proposed attracts me quite particularly and I estimate to be ready and to trained to make the wantedam ready to be to trained and to work.
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    • Indeed during my previous employment, I realized many tasks, such as the physical and phone welcome, the management of the mail, the management of files, organisation of meetings… Futhermore, I moved regulary helped the various services.
    • Indeed during my previous employment, I realized many tasks, such as the physical and phone welcome, the management of the mail, the management of files, organiszation of meetings… Furthermore, I moved regularyly and helped the various services.
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    • I am available on December 15th, 2016 for an interview(maintenance) at your convenience and shall be delighted to exchange with you on my skills If my application is held, I shall be naturally available to begin December 22nd and 23rd, 2016.
    • I am available on 15th December 15th, 2016 for an interview(maintenance) at your convenience and shall be delighted to exchange with you on my skills.

      If my application is held, I shall be naturally available to
      begin Decemberjoin on 22nd and 23rd December , 2016. ¶
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