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  • My essay about technological advance)

  • People live in the 21 century, when technological advances have been developing very fast.
    • A number of discrepancies are between adherents of progress and people who claim IT-progress can lead to dangerous consequences.
    • Is it worth to continue using products of the technological advance?
    • In my opinion, technological advance helps us a lot.
    • For example, the Internet opens the gate of the universe of knowledge for pupils and students, for adults it allows learn news about politics and economics.
    • Not only the Internet, but also other breakthroughs of the technological advances play a significant role in our life.
  • A great number of people cannot imagine their lives without PCs, microwave ovens, vacuum cleaners, cars and so on.
    • What is more, but for diverse websites we are able to make the acquaintance with people around the world.
  • Nevertheless, consider the problem from another side.
  • People have been becoming lazy and weak because of using new technologies.
    • They lost a view about the real life, being absorbed into the virtual world.
    • Moreover, we could develop our capabilities if the Internet has not been a kind of addiction.
    • I cannot agree with these points of views because I believe people are not so silly that to spend all life in front of the screens of computers.
    • To conclude, I would point out people should keep up with time, but do it wisely.

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