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  • interview...

  • Hello everybody!
    • I would like to make a short text to introduce myself for an professional interview and it's very difficult for me me to go straight to the point.
  • During my studies at..., I was an Hostess for...and then for.....
    • These experiences helped me to develop my interpersonal skills.
    • After that, I had different missions in .....
  • First, It was for....and then at the....
    • Besides the physical and telephone reception, the work that has been entrusted to me (information, taking appointments, planning and mail management) allowed me to use my sens of responsibility, my reactivity, my diplomacy in front of a very demanding clientèle.
  • Between .....and...., i was in charge of press relation in ....and then in charge of communication at ....,.
    • In one hand, I expanded my skills by being in relationship with a different target, the journalists and in a second hand, at....,I could share my experience helpline managing customer relationship in a call center( reception, loyalty (fidélisation)) to meet business objectives of the company.
    • today, I want to join the world of luxury, fit the value of a prestigious brand and promote it through my knowledge and my behavior self management skills

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    • I would like to make a short text to introduce myself for an professional interview and it's very difficult for me me to go straight to the point.
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    • I would like to make a short text to introduce myself for an professional interview and it's very difficult for me me to go straight to the point.
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    • Besides the physical and telephone reception, the work that has been entrusted to me (information, taking appointments, planning and mail management) allowed me to use my sens of responsibility, my reactivity, my diplomacy in front of a very demanding clientèle.
      赶紧投票吧！
    • Besides the physical and telephone reception, the work that has been entrusted to me (information, taking appointments, planning and mail management) allowed me to use my sense of responsibility, my reactivity, my diplomacy in front of a very demanding clientèle.
      kiskisakiskisa profile picture 评论
      100% GOOD (1 votes)
    • Besides the physical and telephone reception, the work that hwas been entrusted to me (information, taking appointments, planning and mail management) allowed me to use my sense of responsibility, my reactivityskill at thinking on my feet, my diplomacy in front of a very demanding clientèle.
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    • In one hand, I expanded my skills by being in relationship with a different target, the journalists and in a second hand, at....,I could share my experience helpline managing customer relationship in a call center( reception, loyalty (fidélisation)) to meet business objectives of the company.
      赶紧投票吧！
    • InOn the one hand, I expanded my skills by being in relationship with a different target, the journalists and ion athe second hand, at...., I could share my experience helpline managing customer relationship in a call center ( reception, loyalty (fidélisation)) to meet business objectives of the company.
      kiskisakiskisa profile picture 评论
      100% GOOD (1 votes)
    • 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 9增加一條新的校正! - 句子 9
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    • today, I want to join the world of luxury, fit the value of a prestigious brand and promote it through my knowledge and my behavior self management skills
      赶紧投票吧！
    • ¶tToday, I want to join the world of luxury, fit the value of a prestigious brand and promote it through my knowledge and my behavior self management skills
      kiskisakiskisa profile picture 评论
      100% GOOD (1 votes)
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