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  • interview...

  • Hello everybody!
    • I would like to make a short text to introduce myself for an professional interview and it's very difficult for me me to go straight to the point.
  • During my studies at..., I was an Hostess for...and then for.....
    • These experiences helped me to develop my interpersonal skills.
    • After that, I had different missions in .....
  • First, It was for....and then at the....
    • Besides the physical and telephone reception, the work that has been entrusted to me (information, taking appointments, planning and mail management) allowed me to use my sens of responsibility, my reactivity, my diplomacy in front of a very demanding clientèle.
  • Between .....and...., i was in charge of press relation in ....and then in charge of communication at ....,.
    • In one hand, I expanded my skills by being in relationship with a different target, the journalists and in a second hand, at....,I could share my experience helpline managing customer relationship in a call center( reception, loyalty (fidélisation)) to meet business objectives of the company.
    • today, I want to join the world of luxury, fit the value of a prestigious brand and promote it through my knowledge and my behavior self management skills

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    • I would like to make a short text to introduce myself for an professional interview and it's very difficult for me me to go straight to the point.
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    • I would like to make a short text to introduce myself for an professional interview and it's very difficult for me me to go straight to the point.
    • Füge eine neue Korrektur hinzu! - Satz 2Füge eine neue Korrektur hinzu! - Satz 2
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    • Besides the physical and telephone reception, the work that has been entrusted to me (information, taking appointments, planning and mail management) allowed me to use my sens of responsibility, my reactivity, my diplomacy in front of a very demanding clientèle.
      Jetzt abstimmen!
    • Besides the physical and telephone reception, the work that has been entrusted to me (information, taking appointments, planning and mail management) allowed me to use my sense of responsibility, my reactivity, my diplomacy in front of a very demanding clientèle.
    • Besides the physical and telephone reception, the work that hwas been entrusted to me (information, taking appointments, planning and mail management) allowed me to use my sense of responsibility, my reactivityskill at thinking on my feet, my diplomacy in front of a very demanding clientèle.
    • Füge eine neue Korrektur hinzu! - Satz 7Füge eine neue Korrektur hinzu! - Satz 7
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    • In one hand, I expanded my skills by being in relationship with a different target, the journalists and in a second hand, at....,I could share my experience helpline managing customer relationship in a call center( reception, loyalty (fidélisation)) to meet business objectives of the company.
      Jetzt abstimmen!
    • InOn the one hand, I expanded my skills by being in relationship with a different target, the journalists and ion athe second hand, at...., I could share my experience helpline managing customer relationship in a call center ( reception, loyalty (fidélisation)) to meet business objectives of the company.
    • Füge eine neue Korrektur hinzu! - Satz 9Füge eine neue Korrektur hinzu! - Satz 9
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    • today, I want to join the world of luxury, fit the value of a prestigious brand and promote it through my knowledge and my behavior self management skills
      Jetzt abstimmen!
    • ¶tToday, I want to join the world of luxury, fit the value of a prestigious brand and promote it through my knowledge and my behavior self management skills
    • Füge eine neue Korrektur hinzu! - Satz 10Füge eine neue Korrektur hinzu! - Satz 10