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Текст од BonjourKaty - English

  • A story

    • The most devastating accident that I have ever seen is the one that happened in the centre of the city, when a tram crushed a passing bus.
  • It was 2 years ago.
    • I was driving my car and I was just behind the bus.
  • It was terrifying.
  • I was just listening to some music when suddenly I heard a very loud noise.
    • I looked in front of me and what I saw was unbelievable : the tram which was passing came out of the rails and hit the bus that was in front of me.
    • The bus had been literally thrown away and I just had the time to move.
    • I thank god I didn't hurt, I could have died if I hadn't moved !
  • I could hear the unbearable screaming of victims.
  • I was paralized.
  • I saw people trying to help the wounded people and some ambulances arrived after twenty minutes.
  • The bus driver was blamed and someone said he was dead.
  • A huge jam occurred.
    • The victims were moved in the hospitals, while the died people were placed in a nearby field.
  • I would have liked to help those people , but as I saw all that blood, I fainted, and when I wake up I found myself in an ambulance too.
  • I couldn't believe what happened, the whole event occurred in just a few minutes and the effects were devastating.
  • That night I didn't sleep.
  • I was too sad for the relatives of the victims, I could imagine how they were feeling.
    • It could be unbelievable but unfortunately there are moments in which we can't control our destiny, sometimes the fate can be cruel.
    • And I thank god to be alive.

МОЛИМО, ПОМОЗИТЕ ИСПРАВИТИ СВАКУ РЕЧЕНИЦУ! - English