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Text from Arimolukina - English

    • Please, correct my essay. I`ll be greateful!

    • In today`s world humanity has an actual problem of the proper nutrition.
  • Some people think not all the food is wholesome, but others claim food is only our friend.
    • To my mind, food may become an enemy for us.
  • First and foremost, it is unhealthy nutrition.
    • If we eat such food as chips, hamburgers, fries which have carcinogens and a large amount of fat, we deprive ourselves of healthy life.
    • What is more, junk food enjoying widespread popularity may become a cause of obesity.
    • By now scientists have created genetically modified crops that have studied a bit, although they have been sold in markets, it`s may touch off some diseases.
  • On the other hand, food cannot be people`s enemy because it gives us a lot of energy.
  • Besides, for some people food intake is a source of psychological satisfaction.
  • I don`t agree with these points of view because the more people eat, the more they have stomach diseases.
    • Moreover, we get a great number of energy from healthy food, but didn`t junk food.
  • We have a choice to make food our enemy or our friend.
  • To draw a conclusion one can say that people should eat to live, but not to live to eat.

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English