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    • Hi there! I want to prove my English!

  • Hi there!
    • I'm here to prove my English.
    • I'm Italian but I want to speak English very well.. so, I'm here!
  • ;) I'm 15, I love listening to music, drawing and singing!
    • My love are concerts.
  • For example, this year I will go to five concerts!
  • The first is in April.
  • There's Conor Maynard's concert and I will go there with some friends!
  • In May I will go to Lana del Rey's concert with my best friend!
  • In June there are 3 concerts..
  • Muse's concert in Turin, Paramore's and finally Jovanotti's (italian singer) concert in Milan!
  • I'm so excited!
  • If there are some english girls or guys please contact me, I want to practice this language! Bye ;)

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