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Hi everybody, my name is Charlene and I'm 16 years old.
- I'm French and I'm here to meet people from everywhere in the world, and for improve my language. Enjoy :)

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- I'm French and I'm here to meet people from everywhere in the world, and for improve my language. Enjoy :)
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