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  • Origin of Chinese Spring Festival

    • Why Chinese love red and why Chinese Spring Festival?
    • Because Chinese ancestor believed that at the end of the year of lunar calendar,all gods will go back to heanven.
    • Without gods' protection,a monster named “year”comes out to hurt people,bringing with disaster to the world.
    • But it has an vital point that being afraid of red,so Chinese make red firework,red lanterns,red paper-cuts ect.
    • The most special red thing is red packet,which is given by parents and relative,containting good fortune and wishes,protecting children going through the year.
    • There is an advertisement of Mcdonald's that the monster "year"stoped three people and asked them for the pies.However a man broke apart the pie and told the "year"that was a red bean pie,then the "year"was scare away.It is creative advertisement.

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    • Because Chinese ancestor believed that at the end of the year of lunar calendar,all gods will go back to heanven.
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    • Because Chinese ancestor believed that at the end of the year of lunar calendar,all gods willould go back to heanven.
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    • Because our Chinese ancestors believed that at the end of the year of lunar calendlunar year, all gods will go backreturn to heanven.
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    • Without gods' protection,a monster named “year”comes out to hurt people,bringing with disaster to the world.
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    • Without gods' protection,a monster named “year”comes out to hurt people,bringing with disaster to the world.¶¶without gods' protections, a monster named "year", would come out to hurt people and bring catastrophe to the world.
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    • Without gods'the protection of the gods,a monster namcalled “year”comes out will emerge to hurt people, bringing with it disaster to the world.
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    • But it has an vital point that being afraid of red,so Chinese make red firework,red lanterns,red paper-cuts ect.
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    • But it has an vital point that being afraid of red,so Chinese make red firework,red lanterns,red paper-cuts ect.¶¶but it had a weakness of being frightened by red color so that Chinese made red fireworks, red-colored lanterns, red paper-cuts, etc
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    • But it has an vitalThis monster's weak point is that beingit is afraid of red, so the Chinese make red firework,s, red lanterns, red paper-cuttings ectc.
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    • The most special red thing is red packet,which is given by parents and relative,containting good fortune and wishes,protecting children going through the year.
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    • The most special red thing is red packet,which is given by parents and relative,containting good fortune and wishes,protecting children going through the year.¶¶red packet was the most special red-thing given by parents and relatives. it contained not only good fortunes and wishes but also protected children to go through the year.¶¶
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    • The most special red thing is red packet,the red envelope, which is given by parents and relative,s, containting good fortune and wishes, and protecting children going throughout the year.
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    • There is an advertisement of Mcdonald's that the monster "year"stoped three people and asked them for the pies.However a man broke apart the pie and told the "year"that was a red bean pie,then the "year"was scare away.It is creative advertisement.
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    • There is an advertisement of Mcdonald's that the monster "year"stoped three people and asked them for the pies.However a man broke apart the pie and told the "year"that was a red bean pie,then the "year"was scare away.It is creative advertisement. ¶¶there was a Mcdonalds' advertisement told about the "year" stopped three people and asked them for pies. however a man broke the pie apart and said to "year" it was a red bean pie and then "year" run away knowing it was red. it was a creative advertisement.
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    • There is an McDonald's advertisement of Mcdonald's thatwhere the monster "year" stopeds three people and askeds them for the pies. However a man brokeeaks apart the pie and toldells the "year" that was a red bean pie, then the "year"was scare away.It isus scaring away the "year". I think this was a really creative advertisement.
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