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    • Mini Essay: Benefits of Living in Big Cities

    • I have been living in a city for all my life.
    • So, I think live in the urban areas have many more benefits to living in a countryside.
    • In my opinion, people who live in the cities could find a job more easily, and they salary would be much higher than in rural areas.
    • It happens as a result of competitions between organizations, because they want to find better employers.
    • Also, in cities people be able to work or study near the place where they live, and commuting would not takes much time.
    • Another benefit of urban areas is many convenient places for shopping and leisure time.
  • So I believe, life in metropolitan areas is much easier than in rural areas.
    • Why rural areas have disadvantages?
    • Sometimes people, who live in the countryside, have a limited choice of a job, therefore they could not earn as the same amount of money, as they could in cities.
    • To solve this problem, government may set taxes to zero where population is low.
    • I suggest, some of companies could move to the countryside and create new work places.
    • Another problem in rural areas is a slow internet connection speed.
    • Some of people could work at home, but without a fast and stable Internet they do not have the ability to do it.
    • In my opinion, government also should provide high speed internet access for people who do not live in big cities.
    • To conclude, live in cities much easier then live in the country side.
    • In urban areas people have much more place where they could earn more, make shopping and have a great leisure time.

МОЛИМО, ПОМОЗИТЕ ИСПРАВИТИ СВАКУ РЕЧЕНИЦУ! - English