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Text from Taperda - English

    • letter complaint mobile phone

    • Hello sir/madam, I bought iphone 6s plus two months ago in apple store online.
    • The mobile phone had not been broken by me.
    • The glass screem is broken.
    • However, the touch screem work good.
    • On the other hand, the screem glass narrow crack, I don´t like see this crack while I am using it Talking from experience, the iphone 4 is harder tan iphone 6s plus.
  • But iphone 6s plus is bigger than iphone 4.
    • If it droped it, the iphone 4 wouldn´t broke glass screem.
    • Finnally, I wrote this letter because I want that you know this problem, I replace third time glass screem.
  • I look forward to hearing from you yours faithfully.

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