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    • Trends of shopping

    • Shopping is an important part of our life.
    • Every day we do shopping.
  • There are different kinds of shops.
  • We can buy items in stores, supermarkets, hypermarkets, small shops and even on the Internet.
    • There are different types of costumer, they are windows shopper, frequent shopper, spend shopper, careful shopper and so on.
    • Nowadays, we can see such trend as opening a lot of malls.
    • Small shop close because of this.
  • I think that it is good because it is comfortable when you can find everything under one roof.
  • This is a type of customer`s shop.
    • Another one trend in shopping is retail revolution in a supermarket in southern Germany.
    • It is foot their bills with their fingerprints.
  • I hope that it will come to Russia as soon as possible.
    • Speaking about online – shopping, it is becoming more and more popular.
    • From the 90-s until now, gradually people have accepted virtual shopping to be an easy and affordable way to get hold of things ranging from luxury items such as smartphones and laptops, to everyday items such as grocery and stationery.
  • More and more stores are opening their own websites to enable consumers to shop online.
    • Firstly, it saves time.
    • Secondly, items usually cost cheaper than in tradition shops.
  • I conclusion, I can say that shopping is developing every day.

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