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Текст од Kasahara - English

  • Are we too dependent on computers?

    • In the last twenty years, the number of computers used by people had been increased.
  • Those days, there was a PC at home, at least in Spain.
    • It was normally used as a typewriter, (That was my case ) When I studied at the University, I had never had to use computer to work.
    • I studied with books and the notes of the class.
  • I can’t imagine this situation now.
    • My three children need a tablet each one to do the homework ant they only are al the Primary School.
    • Computers are in our lives in a very large kind of manners: mobile phones, tablets, videogames… I really think that they make our lives easier, but on the other hand in many occasions We pass much time using them.
    • Perhaps to much time.
    • If your mobile phone gets off because their battery is low, you cold get into panic ( I’ve experimented this sensation once) As a conclusion, I think computers have a lot of advantages, more than disadvantages.
    • But we must be careful at their use.

МОЛИМО, ПОМОЗИТЕ ИСПРАВИТИ СВАКУ РЕЧЕНИЦУ! - English