Corrections

Battle

• Yesterday, an awful and deadly battle happened.

• During this battle, a major, showed his skill as brillant leader ; he inflict to us a crushing defeat when he won the fight.

• This battle was his last battle because he died during this battle, killed by United States military.

• Our troups were not enough organized.

• Opposite, they were largely responsible for the success of their victory, because that is them who decided to attacked.

• It is their second landslide victory.

• He will certainly stay in folk memory as a brillant leader.

• Opposite, they were 2 Indian tribe.