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please help me
Hi My names nurdeniz.ım from turkey.
- I want to english but if you are help me.
- Im 21 years old. Im a student.
And ı must learn english.
I life with my family.they are my all.

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- Hi My names nurdeniz.ım from turkey.
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- I want to english but if you are help me.
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- And ı must learn english.
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- I life with my family.they are my all.
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