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  • Everything Is In Your Hands

  • Recently I've read an interesting story about the man who strongly changed his life.
  • He had almost everything except the happiness.
  • The life had been passing quickly with no pleasure, joy, satisfaction and aspiration to live.
  • He had a great bust-up with his wife, he got tired of his job as a shoes seller.
  • Nothing promised a better future.
  • A strong dissapointment made him try an upheaval: he decided to sell his life by auction.
  • He divorced with his wife and put up for auction his job, his house and every material thing that surrounded him during the life.
  • As a result, the man found himself with his passport, alone and uncomplicated for something worth gladness and hope.
  • He got 305 thousand dollars for all sold stuff and went for a long journey around the world.
  • He discovered the world with all its unique creations, people and cultures and began to realize his new 100-goals list.
  • It took him a hundred of weeks to reach all 100 dreams.
  • Time passed and the man decided to settle down.
  • He bought a small uninhabited island, built there a house, made a complete comfort and finally found the love of his life.
  • Now he is a married man with his own island and household.
  • He also wrote several books about his dangerous lifestyle haha.
  • Not every man is able to ger rid of the previous life and start from scratch. Remember.
  • Only you is a creator of your life. Make it. Change it.
  • Realize your dreams and never give up, because the life is the only one. So value it.

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