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Text from Dayuna - English

  • Susan boyle's performance

  • Have you seen Britain's got talent yesterday night ?
    • Yes, i just loved Susan Boyles's performance !
  • Eventhough the audience was very ill at ease with her because of her apprearance, that's right i was pretty delighted.
    • But I think that she sould do a makeover it would be better for her image to appear on television.
  • You know how it's work, modern communication is based on appearances...
  • That's unfair, appearance is not the most important thing.
  • Her look is a part of her personnality and she does'nt have to change !
  • If she wants symbolise the UK abroad, she has to appeal to the largest audience.
  • Her appearance does'nt match her voice, look, every single famous singers are attractive !
  • Precisely, she'll teach people a lesson about appearance because she can become famous withtout change.
    • I don't think so...Celebrities are exemples to people and they don't want become like her..
  • They don't want someone who looks funny and friendly ?
  • She has an inner beauty and it makes her unique !
  • Moreover, she has her imperfections like everybody else, so people can identify to her.
    • And do you think about her career ?
  • Some singers are successful only thanks to their appearance.
  • So she will be the exception.
  • Absolutly not, it would be less difficult to have good photos to promote her image, at the moment she's too ridiculous.
  • Edith Piaf or Jacques Brel were ot very attractive but people did'nt mind.
  • Not everyone judges on appareances you know. Rah..
  • And appart from her show's image, it would be better for her private life.
  • You know, arich man may fall in love with her, and she could be more self confident She looks happy the way she is, i'm sure people can love her somehow.

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