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Cover : ِAdventures of Fatafeat Elsokkar Issue 2 Whispering of Shar shar By:Islam Mohammed Abo farha Page1: After a beautiful day in the school , Fatafeat El Sokkar walked back to her house .

Page 2: Suddenly, loud voices came from the other side of the road.

Fatafeat stopped and tried to figure out what is the problem .

She saw some people arguing loudly and about to fight .And not too far from them , she saw Hesham laying on the ground.

He seemed to be injured.

She ran toward him quickly .

Page 3 : She helped him to set down .

“What did happen?” she asked .

He answered in pain :”While I passing by Mr.Sa'eed and Mr.Fo'ad then they started to shout to each other as they were talking about their soccer teams .Few seconds later they fought and the people in the street tried to stop them but they also involved in the fight .

Page 4 : “I fell down on the ground after someone pushed me.

That what did happen .“Hesham said He continued :” But I do not understand why are they fighting for?” Page 5: A strange beeping voice came from Fatafeat's bag which was vibrating and jumping allover the place .

Page 6 : “What is this voice.

It comes from your bag ?

“ Hesham asked .

Fatafeat opened the bag , she grabbed something from it.

Something like a tablet computer .

Page 7 : “What is this?” Hesham asked “It is the Makh Makh newest invention .

He told me it disables Shar Shar hiding device.” She answered.

Page 8 : It was a surprise to see Shar Shar in the device screen when Fatafeat Elsokkar pointed the device toward people direction and the device was still beeping .

“Look Fatafeat , He is truly Shar Shar “ He sham shouted.

Page 9 : Hesham took the device from Fatafeat trying to figure out how does this device work?

Shar shar was not visible at all , but he could be seen on the screen." How can Shar Shar be invisible?

And what is he doing there?

" Hesham asked.

Page 10 : " Do not forgive him , he does not deserve your sympathy and must be stopped from doing such acts" Shar Shar whispered to Fo'ad.

" This Fo'ad is not a respectful person .

He always makes troubles .

He must be punished.

" He whispered to Sa'ed too.

Page 11 : Hesham pressed a button while he was asking Fatafeat : " What are these buttons?" .Suddenly, a very loud bang sound heard near those men.

Page 12: " Look there , Shar Shar is visible now" , Hesham shouted to Fatafeat.

People shocked by the sound , it was a big surprise to everyone.They did not believe seeing Shar Shar appearance from no where.

Page 13 : Shar Shar did not understand , it was a greater surprise for him too .

People surrounded him showing a lot of anger .

He made a fake smile to make them calm down.

Page 14 : Shar Shar tried to run away , but he could not .Fo'ad jumped and caught him before he escaped.

Fo'ad shouted in him " You are a naughty boy, I will tell your parents about what you did.

How dare you try to make us fight each others ?

You always cause troubles ".

Shar Shar said while he was crying : " I am very sorry .

I will not make that again " Page 15 : Sa'ed said to Fatafeat and Hesham: " we are very thankful to both of you for revealing the evil trick that this naughty boy did .

He made us forget about our friendship and brotherhood among each others.

Our passion to soccer are not important compared to be friends ."