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Happy New Year
Hello!
My name is Katty.
- I am from Belarus and i want to tell you a story about my journey to Tenerife.
- First of all, it was interesting for me to celebrate New Year in a place where is a warm and sunny climate (because in my country the snow and too cold in this time of year).
- The second reason was to practice my English with different people.
- And finally, I like discovering a new places:) In a few words it was amazing travel for me!

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- Happy New Year
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- Hello!
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- My name is Katty.
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- I am from Belarus and i want to tell you a story about my journey to Tenerife.
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- I am from Belarus and iI want to tell you a story about my journey to Tenerife.
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- First of all, it was interesting for me to celebrate New Year in a place where is a warm and sunny climate (because in my country the snow and too cold in this time of year).
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- First of all, it was interesting for me to celebrate New Year in a place w~~here is~~ith a warm and sunny ~~climate~~weather (because in my country ~~the~~ snows and is too cold in this time of year).
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- First of all, it was interesting for me to celebrate New Year in a place w~~here is~~ith a warm and sunny climate (because in my country ithe snows and is too cold in this time of year).
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- First of all, it was interesting for me to celebrate Nthe new Yyear in a ~~place where is a warm and sunny climate (because in my country the snow and too cold in this time of year)~~sunny and a warm place, cause in my hometown it s very cold and there are a lot of snow.
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- The second reason was to practice my English with different people.
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- The second reason, it was to practice my English with different people.
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- And finally, I like discovering a new places:) In a few words it was amazing travel for me!
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- And finally, I like to discover~~ing a~~ new places :) In a few words, it was an amazing travel for me!
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Happy New Year

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