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Text from temptress - English

  • Hiii

    • Above all, I had written this text message because I'm a novice on the site.
    • Certainly, for correct grammatical flaw.
    • I registered here because I need english for work.
  • So I'd like to see if someone can help me.
    • And will friend for me.
    • I look for a nice guy first, also to make friendships.
  • If you want to learn Arabic or Persian I'm a professional tutor.
    • I want to get a real conversation with him or her with American or British people.
    • It means pepole who speak fluently in english.
  • Shine my page with your reply.
    • Thank you for advance!

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English