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    • A gift certificate

    • Please help me to write a text for a gift certificate.
    • The idea is to make a certificate of three wishes as a new year present for my boyfriend.
    • Of course it will be written on beautiful piece of paper :) Please correct me and if you have some advises I'll be glad to receive them.
    • Thank you in advance : This certificate is given to Mr.John, 1 January 2015 Brussels, Belgium.
    • The certificate gives a right to make three wishes, which will be accomplished by Ms Lana in the shortest time.
    • The certificate valid until 31 December 23:59 of year 2015.
  • In case of not using it by indicated time, the certificate looses it's power.

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