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    • The nanny State

    • As Introduction I have to say that sometimes our Government try to protect us giving recomendations.
    • Nevertheless, everybody don´t agree with them.
    • One example could be the Health Service Deparment Suggestions.
    • Therefore I want to talk about vaccination, thaat I think is the most important preventive measure who affects every single person in our country, especially children and senior citizens.
    • From my point of view there are some vaccines that could be the best option for our health because its prevent high mortality rate illness.
    • Moreover , I think it´s an excessive measure to vaccinate the population for influenza every year.
    • It is for that reason that I think government should recommend but giving freedom to decide everyone the things that we think are better for us.

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