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Hello, my name is Marina.
I want to tell you about my little dog!
She is beautiful, small and curly!
- She can all day play with us in the house or outside of house!
- She is 5 months old...
Right now, she is asleep!
- After she wake up, we need to go to eat something!

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- Hello, my name is Marina.
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- I want to tell you about my little dog!
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- She is beautiful, small and curly!
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- She can all day play with us in the house or outside of house!
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- Sshe can ~~all day play with us in the~~play all day with us. No matter if she's in housme or ~~outside of house!~~in a garden.
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- She is 5 months old...
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- S¶she is just 5 months old...
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- Right now, she is asleep!
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- After she wake up, we need to go to eat something!
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- After she wakes up, we need to go to eat something!
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