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- love story
It was summer season ... eternal love ...
- I trist..dezamagit and devoid of any trace of trust ... just break up with the girl he had loved ... truly a girl who managed to make me be happy just 3 day ... memories ...
I grind her existence! a long depression ... many tears ... confidence in themselves ... and more durere..cam those were feelings after the break it!

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- It was summer season ... eternal love ...
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- I trist..dezamagit and devoid of any trace of trust ... just break up with the girl he had loved ... truly a girl who managed to make me be happy just 3 day ... memories ...
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- I ~~trist..dezamagit~~sad..disappointed and devoid of any trace of trust ... just break up with the girl he had loved ... truly a girl who managed to make me be happy just 3 day ... memories ...
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- I grind her existence! a long depression ... many tears ... confidence in themselves ... and more durere..cam those were feelings after the break it!
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