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Текст од whiterose1 - English

  • Hi everyone,

  • Hi my friend, I wrote about a foreign language like a little Dragon.
  • because When it's hungry, puffing his flames inside me, for pushing me to do the impossible things.
  • And when it's satisfied.
    • It becomes a nice like a sea breezes, raising me at the top of the world.
  • Isn't the nice feeling.
    • I know it's weird , but that what I came up with.
    • I am also love it ,but sometimes it's bothering me , as you know I still a learner on this sea.

МОЛИМО, ПОМОЗИТЕ ИСПРАВИТИ СВАКУ РЕЧЕНИЦУ! - English