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  • A short description of my life

  • please coorect me i will be evaluated in this writing exam thank you all . let us begin.
  • :) Young student engineering but i studying actually actually in France in a big engineering school named UTBM( University of Technology Belfort-Montbeliard) i am originally from morocco exactly born in the econimic capital, Casablanca,who is known by his hystorical monument, art,building etc ..
  • Regarding my studies,actually i am a first year student at the University of Technology of Belfort-Montbeliard i have been preparing my Electrical Engineering,i am in Energy and Environement departement studying many subjects or UV suach as Electronic Power,Electronic,power production,regulation ect...
    • In general case we prepare our engineering degee en 3 years,divided in two important things 2 years are reserved for studet to improve his theorical knowledge such as the subject we learn like Mathematics,physics and many different subject and one year to do an internship in industriel company.
    • in the school where i live there are many diffrent students around the so it is a good oportinitie to know the culter of another country, moreover there is many different entairtenments ,UTBM give you apportinitie to practise many sports for free such as Football,Basket-ball,ect.For me i prefer drawing for example a a japanese mangas there is a greet club in UTBM

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    • :) Young student engineering but i studying actually actually in France in a big engineering school named UTBM( University of Technology Belfort-Montbeliard) i am originally from morocco exactly born in the econimic capital, Casablanca,who is known by his hystorical monument, art,building etc ..
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    • Regarding my studies,actually i am a first year student at the University of Technology of Belfort-Montbeliard i have been preparing my Electrical Engineering,i am in Energy and Environement departement studying many subjects or UV suach as Electronic Power,Electronic,power production,regulation ect...
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    • In general case we prepare our engineering degee en 3 years,divided in two important things 2 years are reserved for studet to improve his theorical knowledge such as the subject we learn like Mathematics,physics and many different subject and one year to do an internship in industriel company.
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    • In general case we prepare, we obtain our engineering degree ein 3 years, divided in two important thingssections: 2 years are reserved for studeties to improve his theoretical knowledge such as the subjects we learn like Mathematics, physics and many different subjectothers, and one year to do an internship in an industrieal company.
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    • in the school where i live there are many diffrent students around the so it is a good oportinitie to know the culter of another country, moreover there is many different entairtenments ,UTBM give you apportinitie to practise many sports for free such as Football,Basket-ball,ect.For me i prefer drawing for example a a japanese mangas there is a greet club in UTBM
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    • ¶iIn the school where iI live there are many different students around the, so it is a good opportiunitiey to know the culturer of another country, m. Moreover, there isare many different entairtetypes of entertainments ,: UTBM giveoffers you an opportiunitiey to practise many sports for free such as Ffootball,B basket-ball, ect. For me i, I prefer drawing for example a a jart such as Japanese mangas t. There is a greeat club in UTBM .
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