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    • If you felt weary, you should have your work fewer hours.
    • Could you make a sentence for me with Be mechanized?
    • Being the mechanized in agriculture is the way developed by China.
    • Many profession exist hidden rule, which is an unreasonable.
    • Dancing brought me the experience of the feeling of freedom.
    • The Cretaceous period was between the Jurassic period and the Paleogene.
    • Silicon Valley is a region, where is an important electronics industry of base of America.
    • The successful of Beijing’s Olympic is an important landmark of sport of China.
    • The world premiere ceremony of this movie will begin hold in Beijing City.
    • When he said so long, my tear shed.
  • You should speed up the pace of your life.

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