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  • My future profession

    • When I was a pupil I used often be asked about my future profession.
    • I had no exact plans about my future carrier.
    • Maybe because of it I had many variants among them were: a doctor, a teacher and a psychologist.
    • After school graduation I entered a technological college on the faculty of sewing and really understood that it was mine.
  • I immersed in improving my skills.
  • I did my best to get enough knowledge to be the master of it.
    • As a result, I had my own collection of dresses at the end of my studying.
  • Now I was certain of my future profession.
    • The knowledge I had accumulated during my studying in the college was a good base and I decided to continue my education.
  • I went to London and successfully entered a university.
  • My big dream is to open my own fashion house.
    • I have lots of plans of my future.
  • I’m sure I will succeed.

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