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Текст од arcangel2014 - English

    • adventure

  • When I was a teenager I went camping with my friends in Marcahuasi (Lima) for the first time.
  • They used to go camping twice a year but I've never been there so I felt nervous the first time.
    • To reach the mountain's hilltop we went hiking around three hours.
    • The weather wasn't very well for me because there was very little oxygen, also the way was really difficult to walk.
    • However, suddenly I had enough force to continue but inmediately it started to rain a lot... bad luck!.
    • Finally, I arrived at top but I fell asleep why I was too tired while my friends were enjoying in a great party.

МОЛИМО, ПОМОЗИТЕ ИСПРАВИТИ СВАКУ РЕЧЕНИЦУ! - English